[The Spawning Enslaved #2] EBOOK/EPUB

The Spawning Enslaved #2 EBOOK/EPUB

I ve been on a kick lately of looking for omances between an alien and a human I took a chance on this one and liked it very much First of all I bought an ebook and the book was 283 pages long so good value for the money I m tired of paying 6 for a 80 to 100 page ebook There were a few proofing errors but this ex proofreader didn t get too upset so they weren t too annoying Things I liked this was not just an excuse for graphic sex There was a lot of story before anyone got together A Jacques Prevert real attempt was made to show an evolvingelationship between the alien Hiratchi and the human women Relationships between the women were explored although sometimes I still got them mixed up Speaking of the sex the guys were sharing because they out numbered the women 4 or 5 to one but there weren t any menage scenes Each guy had separate time with their woman The men were fairly distinct although Khan was fully ealized than the other three guys There as a pretty good developement of the alien culture of the Hiratchi Problems with the book were twenty Miranda had been snatched and packed for shipping so fast she was still eeling with shock when the trader marched her and the other women hed kidnapped from Earth into the compound on the strange.

Omen were transported to this alien planet and not one of them had a useful skill Some of the things they didn t know were pretty obvious It took them months for example to attempt to smoke some meat so they weren t totally dependent on the Hiratchi bringing them fresh meat every other day Hadn t they ever studied history at all No one seemed to know how to make a fire or cook a meal Another thing that was unrealistic was that they kept having problems because they were misunderstanding each other s actions Still no one sat down with one of the aliens and said okay you did this What was that all about or On Earth we do this What do you do is the same situation Lots of misunderstandings could have been avoided It drove the plot but was a bit unrealistic On a final note that has nothing to do with the uality of the book is that the picture on the front totally does not match the story These women were supposed to be tiny mid chest to the aliens but if this chick stood up she would tower over this guy Just saying Plot holes antecedent confu. Alien world She discovered that was only the beginning howeverThe Hirachi were nearing their spawning season When the massive golden skinned dark haired warriors marched from the sea she learned.

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Sion still interesting though Thank you for the existence of a plot and some depthconnection to the characters Surprisingly well done Okay so after eading book one I wasn t sure about the time frame But it was still a good story I definitely couldn t put it down Great story based on book 1 Alien Enslaved I Genesis The characters and story were enjoyable and well developed The book could use better editing as there were plenty of missing words or grammar usage errors These problems only distract from a enjoyable ead Some grammar can be over looked but missing words stops the flow of The Astonishing Life of Octavian Nothing, Traitor to the Nation, Volume 1: The Pox Party readingI gave the book 4 stars as I still enjoyed the story and world Ms O Connor manages to present time and time again with her imagination AlienI veead this book twice and it s ok as far as actiondramabut I wasnt to enthralled with this book I seriously had to concentrate to continuously stay interestedThis book could have been a lot the plot needed to be expanded Over all I have it three starsliked most of v the characterssome needed to be expanded That the trader had brought her and the others to sell them to the Hirachi as breedersRating Carnaladult situations frank language graphic sexual encounters multiple partners spawning orgy gang ba.

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