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EAR this author cannot tell the difference between present tense past tense and past participle She can t decide if her characters are speaking in the present or in past participle and so most sentences have both tenses in them Also if I EVER see the fucking word Yanno again I think I m going to burn something down LITERALLY It just reads sooooo out of character for this individual the author is trying to sell s Like where in this character s life would she have picked it The Highlander and the Wolf Princess (Legend of the Faol, up and it s so random to be the only collouialism of it s kindsed by this character that it leaves me confused and irritated EVERY TIME IT APPEARS ON PAGEI REALLY DIDN T WANT TO DNF THIS BOOK BUT BOY WAS IT A CLOSE ONE Uggghhh and the only reason I started it to begin with was because I wanted to read one of her other books and it suggested getting to know Nick in this one first I am saddened because it has so much potential and with an editor it would actually be a really good book But well as it stands there s just too many errors in the writing for me I have not been able to put this book down BDSM has always intrigued me and this story gives you a little taste I feel bad that Sephora is so naive and hope that she hurries and grows p I had a feeling that Jillian was as going to be a problem Why do powerful people like him always has some kook in their circle I can t sit to finish this review so I can read the next installment Glad to see Kevin Briggs and Mariettie law firm mentioned Thanks Blue Safire for an intriguing story Love this author s work and I m glad that this story just focused on Sophi and Nicholas This is actually the first story that I have read from this author that was only told from one point of few I suspect the second book will be from Nicholas s sense the first just focused on Sophi Now I will say that you as a reader has to be patient with the character of Sophi because she is so frustrating and immature especially in the beginning of the book but she starts to grow as the book progresses By the end of the story she still has some growing to do but I m hoping that she grows into a mature competent woman by the third book Overall was a sweet love story built into a book based on a sub and dom relationship So far not much information is given but small hints are given about how that dynamic will be in the two main characters relationship If you want to read some other great books that have the same relationship dynamics I recommend my to favorites Ezra series by Love Belvin and Sweetest Taboo by Harper Miller I have chocolate skin that. Ve yet to find your voice and who you are But he helps to find me in the last place I ever thought to look My only concern is will he want to keep me I have always wanted Nicholas Lincoln Now that I have him can I really keep him This is Book 1 in the Yours Series This book does end with a cliffhanger However there are 3 full length novels in the series that are being released a week from each other Blue Saffire’s books are written to weave.
I hated this chickI wonder sometimes if authors know how much we need to like empathize or be captivated by the characters we are reading about This book was giving me good vibes AT FIRST I was a getting that vibe where you just know you are gonna get a good story the hero is flawed the heroine likes him from a distance but doesn t take crap from him then BAM Like a thunderbolt you are treated to the worst cliches and annoyances a book can provide I found myself feeling dumb for being on this weird chicks side in the first place oh the betrayal Name it got it 1 A Female with no self worth and I mean none and I don t know how I did not see how weak she was in the first encounter with the hero oh the betrayal 2 She lets the hero The Princes Ultimate Deception (Monte Carlo Affairs, use her as a babysitter and cook Oh sweet baby Jesus 3 She didn t have a life and let his side piece call her a fatty fatty fat fat I was done y all after she meets with a lost lover goes on a date but still manages to give some to the creepy stalker hero who figures out he wants her after everybody tells him he kinda knew but really needed everyone to confirm eye roll not a man y all to have sexy dreams of I figure the 3 hours I spent with this book is all I have to give and have no interest in watching the growth of this moron and the dude she likes than she loves herself over the course of 2 other books it could be my loss but I am willing to take that risk which is a shame really because this book started like a pistol and I wanted to like it I really really did I REALLY WANTED TO LIKE THIS But alas I think maybe I m even disappointed because of how difficult it is to find a BWWM Romance author I like who is actually good at writing and doesn t just throw words on a page and the storyline is pretty good it has so much potential if ONLY the writing wasn t so bad at this point I d even settle for just an editor I mean I love me some Nick and Sophi isn t too bad herself given what else is out there she could be significantly worse she strikes me as naive than anything else and that we can live with because she has potential to mature out of it But this writingggggg LAWD THIS BOOK NEEDS A FUCKING EDITOR OH EM GEEEEEEE I know I m getting repetitive but jeez that s how I felt every time I read every repetitive word in almost every other sentence sometimes even in the same sentence I TRIED I tried REALLY HARD But I just couldn t It got to a point I was highlighting all the words that were missused all those that weresed in place of what shouldcould have been thereby rendering the sentence illegible and I SW. Yours Losing My Innocence Book 1 in the Yours Series Yours Book 1 I have waited a long time for the woman I have always known she would become My past demons and her insecurities will try to tear Breaking the Governesss Rules us apart but I am strong enough for both ofs Besides there is no letting go She is mine and I will protect that fact against anyone even her I have answered to everyone’s wishes for me all my life It is hard to know where you are going when you ha.
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Only works on my mother or pretty girls like Tika Sumpter or Naturi Naughton I m done That was the euivalent of you re pretty for a dark skinned girl I think this was a great read something that I can relate to I too growing The Christmas Children (The Mellow Years up having to face some of Sephora obstacle in life have people thinking you re not good enough Dark skin girl did not have the monopoly on this Having being a light skin girl I had to listen to people saying you think you re better because of it As a child that s hurt coming from family because you happens to be some shades lighter to the point you re finding yourself sitting in the sun trying to get darker I know I went off script but it brought back memory OMG the sex scene was awesome Many authors have what I call a theme or a formula for their books For many it could be the genre eg mafia baby etc but for some it could be the actual characters themselves Let me explain Author Blue Saffire in her recent release of the Yours series discusses briefly why she in many of h Hmmmm I mean I liked it I will read book 2 but we are going to have to give me of a twist to make me feel like this isn t a normal version of nope I ll just keep that to myself so now I wait I will know for sure book two if I like it or love it I have read all of this author s books and enjoyed most of themThis story was a good read and I totallynderstand about Sephora s trust issues what I found hard to deal with is that Nick s secretary already demonstrated to Sephora that she wants her man and will play dirty tricks to get to Sephora Instead of trusting her man or at least giving him the benefit of the doubt she immediately thinks the worse of him when this woman pulls one of numerous tricks on Sephora I thought she would have learned from her previous experience with this woman and trust her man instead of instantly believing the worse of him So whilst I enjoyed the story I was very disappointed with this element of the story I think we should give the men we say we love the benefit of the doubt Too Strong to Deny/Savage Awakening/Jack Riordans Baby/His Forbidden Passion until they proves wrong Just my view We will have to see what happens in book 2 You need a new hireI enjoy most of your books but after reading The Firefighters Christmas Reunion uite a few I m growing annoyed by the misuse of words and it is consistent in all your novels Whoever you have proof reading your work should be fired Good god the word is ensure not insure and there are so many others If you take the time to write a story you have to ensure that those that support you do their job It is only because your story holds my interest that I haven t walked away from you. Loop and intertwine with one another You will find that the series build together for a greater experience This book has strong language and sexual content Be advised there will be some BDSM play in this book Nothing extreme and the book does not focus solely on this aspect It is a tastefully added bonus So don't be afraid to try it This Book is for Mature Readers 18 To keepp with release dates sign p to the mailing list at wwwbluesaffirec.
SAFFIRE is a woman on a mission to share her words and thoughts with the world She has found her passion in her pen and steams up the pages with her humor honesty love and voice Saffire represents the secret author inside that some of us are too scared to let out She also writes under the pen name