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Rt of finishing In a final attempt to make money any way he can he considers selling himself on the streets like his friend Leroy While Leroy is starting to train Sean they cross the path of a dangerous man known as The Russian who seems 25 s Sean the omega annoyed me he was always whining about one thing or another and Armand didn t seem to have time for a mate or a back bone as an alpha This book started out well It was as if I was reading lines onlyI could not find the chemistry of the MC s I got a lot of descriptive information I NEED chemistry This was clearly not for me DNF d at 28% because the writing was just so ludicrous Smarmy unrealistic dialogue and characters I wanted to spork to death 15 StarsI m sorry but I can not recommend this and I RARELY ever say that I m usually a YMMV but for the price of this and the content I just can t justify to anyone forking over that kind of cash I apologize to the author for this opening remark but it s the truth in my opinionNow onto the story There were editing errors like crazy and if I spend 699 US it better be damn near perfection I can normally overlook so much but it was like everything was glaring at me Not even grammarpunctuation but the story itself Like Alpha s can t have male children but somehow Armand La Marche is a direct decedent of top wolf Alpha Guy La Marche How could that be I m confusedSean You are seriously TSTL I am not even kidding But after a while ou kind our stupidity kind of grew on me view spoilerI do want to know what happened to his stepdad After the interview he was never mentioned again Also whatever happened to his old roomies Did they buy the building hide spoiler. Way home to his Manhattan brownstone When the wounded boy stops his car Armand recognizes two thingsthe boy is part wolf an Omega with a great gift and he's Armand's mate Now all Armand has to do is claim his mate and keep him safe from the murder.
REVIEW His Omega Werewolves of Manhattan #1
T The book could use a good editing missing words double words wrong names awkward sentences and too much dialogue I also had trouble to become invested into the characters Although I felt very sorry for Sean after chapter one I think we should have got to know about his struggles I would have loved to read of the characters there is no inner dialogue to make the MC s come to life 35 1 12 of the stars are for the audioA few days ago a friend sent me a pic of his late night snack a frosted Twinkie with sprinkles on two scoops of vanilla ice cream I almost threw up in my mouth because I m generally the person who skips dessert after diner Not a sweets lover At all And et oh Joel Leslie t 35 starsMany people found editing errors well in my case it didn t bother me at all English is my second language and I m crap at it so I enjoyed this storyI had some issues though the times the word baby was mentioned it drove me insaneHere I will give ou some ideas that can be use for next time darling honey sweetheart babe my love and never the less Armand was french why don t use mon amour mon ange mon ch ri and many But no such a luck the freaking baby was in every single page I had a very difficult time finishing this book as it just seemed to be missing too much I am generously giving it a 2 star rating and hoping that the next books in the series are better Unfortunately this book suffered from having first book in a series syndrome by spending too much time on world building Sean uinn is beaten by the man he thought to be his father and then kicked out of the house Cut off from his money he is faced with having to drop out of school just a month or so sho. E problem someone is trying to kill Sean Sean uinn's friend Leroy was gutted trying to protect him He runs for help and stops the first car he sees Armand LaMarche is head Alpha of the North American werewolf council and was in his limousine on his.
I LOVED the story line but the writing was veryunderwhelming The editing was awful There were seuences out of order missing words grammar and so much I normally don t judge a book based on the editing Authors aren t always totally responsible for this a publisher should make sure a lot of these errors are caught This case is an exception because of the extreme nature and the fact that it puts so many errors into the story itselfI did like the characters Sean is a little unbelievable His is a bit naive for his life and innocent I thought the story itself could have been great I loved the ideas and the overall story line of the book It is unfortunate that the errors in the book weren t caught and corrected I think this could be a really good book if re edited correctly I am loup garou and ou are my mate Armand Le Marche 150 Chief Alpha of the Loup garou Council of North America When a oung man ran into the road and stops his car in search of help Armand knows he has finally found his Omega his mate Sean uinn 24 after being beaten and kicked out by his stepfather for being gay ran into some bad luck He is homeless and desperate for money When he and a friend stumble onto a murderer Sean flees to the street manages to stop a car and falls into the hands of Armand Le March Armand is a powerful Alpha and is convinced his Omega is one of great talent He will do anything to keep him safe and make him happy He came across as very caring tenderhearted and warm Alpha not only towards Sean but towards his pack as well The plot of the story looked like one that could have been a strong one but I had a hard time finishing this book The writing felt a little fla. On his way home from a meeting of the North American werewolf council Armand La Marche is stopped in his limousine by a boy who is hurt by an unknown assailant who murdered his friend After decades of searching Armand has found his mate There is on.
E–pub READ His Omega Werewolves of Manhattan #1 ò A.C. Katt
AC Katt was born in New York City’s Greenwich Village She remembers sitting at the fountain in Washington Suare Park listening to folk music while they passed the hat At nine her parents dragged her to New Jersey where she grew up married and raised four children and became a voracious reader of romantic fiction At one time she owned over two thousand novelsNow most of AC’s books are elect